Script for the toilet scene

Here Alana and I have created a rough draft for the script for the toilet scene I am really looking forward to shooting this scene as I believe that it will look really good with the shots and camera movement that Alana has suggested in her previous post.

Ellouise: So...that new stuck girl is starting today.

Jasmin: She a slag?

Lydia: Jasmin, if she is stuck-up then she is not going to be a slag. She'll speak like the queen and look like a neek.

Jasmin: I bet you Lydia, there's no way, you could turn her.

Ellouise: What?

Jasmin: A slut Ellouise...what are you retarded or summin.

Lydia: Shut-up yous two.


Enter school girls


Lydia: Umm. Are you lost. You don't come here mingers.


School girls back out looking at one another anxiously


Ellouise: So you gunna do it?

Lydia:...Alright, be a laugh.


END SCENE

I feel this was a really good opening and introduction to our Queen Bee characters and I really love the way that the characters interact with each other and we as the audience get a real sense of the hierarchy and the relationship between the main characters and how that changes toward the end. This is really an insight into how they dominate the school and manage to control and manipulate the people around them and so they are able to control the situations around them to their advantage. I hope Lora will approve of what we have done so far and that we will be able to adjust it if we need to.

By Hannah Alana and Laura